deep distinct palm lines
covered with rough calluses—
a labourer’s fate.
© Kiran Acharya 2016
*Senryu is a human haiku. Haiku is a Japanese poetry, which traditionally follows a pattern of 5-7-5 syllables in three lines. While Haiku deals with nature, Senryu portrays human characters and emotions.
Honest criticism is always welcome. 😀